Tum Prem Ka Deep Jalao Poem by ramesh rai

Tum Prem Ka Deep Jalao

Tum prem ka deep jalao
Prem shringar SE man ko harshao
Shonit ke kan kan mein chhipa hai
Asim vedna ki vyakul jhankar
Virah prem ka deep jalao.

Anant timir jab chhat jata hai
Saghan badalo ki mekhla ban
Prashast jivan vimochit hota
Is dhara ke prangan mein.

Tum prem ka deep jalao
Meet nayee ashao ko lekar
Swatah tum jalate jao.

Angar bhare is yaun mein
Prem pushp ko bikhrao.

Tum anant mein leen ho jao.

Saturday, August 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 20 August 2015

Tum prem ka deep jalae rakhna, Main chnda ban kar aaoon ga, Gar chandr grahan ki raina hui, Main swem chanda ban jaoon ga. Aandhi aaye ya pawan chale, Yeh deep na bujhne dena kabhi, Meri rah pe tikaye rakhna priye, Aankhein na bhatakne dena kabji. Yeh deep agar jo bujhne lage, Tum apna aap jala dena, IIs prem mein kitni shakti hy, Sansar ko sare bata dena, Jis ganga mein rakh bahegi teri, Main dooboon ga us Ganga mein, Sangam to hamara hona hay, Lekin phirbhi main ro doon ga. This poem was written in only 2 or 3 minutes just after reading your lovely poem, it may contain some errors, you are a great poet, you may revise it.

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Ramesh Rai 20 August 2015

Feeling humbled Sir. Regards.

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