Hope Of Life Poem by ramesh rai

Hope Of Life

Rating: 4.5


Aurora that came with
the dawn,
Strengthened the the ties of life,
With a bouquet of new songs,
For scattering on the face of life,
In the same dawn,
The waves of sound flown,
The face of moon turned dim,
Frightened all In the distant skies,
The stars also turned dim,
Diversion of sky turned in
conversion,
The temples and the churches,
Played the same music,
Yes, same in the vocal music of
mosques,
And the lyric of Nanak,
All dissolved in the wine of hope,
For the hungry thirsty living hearts!

Thursday, March 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sir Akhter Jawad the prominent poet of PH family has translated my bengali poem 'Jivaner Asha'. I love the translation and express my high gratitude with my honest heart to Sir Jawad for wonderful job. I have replaced 'human heart by living heart. Thank you so much Sir Jawad. Regards ever.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2015

Very beautiful poem. Very nicely envisioned. I like this poem. Many thanks respected sir. .....10

1 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 28 March 2015

Dear Ramesh Rai, In the third line the word the has been typed twice. Kindly edit it out. Thanks for your acknowlegement.

1 0 Reply
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 March 2015

Poet Akhtar Jawad and Poet Ramesh Rai get a big applause for the culminating philosophy of life which brings all humanity together. Thank you.

1 0 Reply
Uma Ram 02 April 2015

Awesome poem sir. Beautiful imagery.Thanks for sharing.

1 0 Reply
Amitava Sur 05 April 2015

very good theme of unity in diversity is depicted in those lines, what talks about humanity not differentiating.Thanks to both you and Akhtar vai.

1 0 Reply
Sonali Ganguly 22 March 2020

Well encrypted. Thanks for sharing

0 0 Reply
Sally Plumb Plumb 24 April 2018

All music united in understanding.

0 0 Reply
Marvin Brato 06 December 2017

Believing and hoping for goodness is the innate desire of the heart and soul!

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 21 April 2016

This is such a lovely image- - - - - - ] a bouquet of new songs, For scattering on the face of life .....................................................May all divisiveness be - - ]All dissolved in the wine of hope, For the hungry thirsty living hearts! .....................................................................................Very well written love letter to the world.

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2015

All dissolved in the wine of hope, For the hungry thirsty living hearts! nice liens...10 yes all are live with hope with the fear not to flop with life's show and it should smoothly go

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success