ramesh rai

Gold Star - 25,613 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Hope Of Life - Poem by ramesh rai

Aurora that came with
the dawn,
Strengthened the the ties of life,
With a bouquet of new songs,
For scattering on the face of life,
In the same dawn,
The waves of sound flown,
The face of moon turned dim,
Frightened all In the distant skies,
The stars also turned dim,
Diversion of sky turned in
conversion,
The temples and the churches,
Played the same music,
Yes, same in the vocal music of
mosques,
And the lyric of Nanak,
All dissolved in the wine of hope,
For the hungry thirsty living hearts!

Topic(s) of this poem: hope

Form: Ode


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Sir Akhter Jawad the prominent poet of PH family has translated my bengali poem 'Jivaner Asha'. I love the translation and express my high gratitude with my honest heart to Sir Jawad for wonderful job. I have replaced 'human heart by living heart. Thank you so much Sir Jawad. Regards ever.

Comments about Hope Of Life by ramesh rai

  • Susan Williams (4/21/2016 8:10:00 PM)


    This is such a lovely image- - - - - - ]
    a bouquet of new songs,
    For scattering on the face of life
    .....................................................May all divisiveness be - - ]All dissolved in the wine of hope,
    For the hungry thirsty living hearts!
    .....................................................................................Very well written love letter to the world.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/14/2015 7:32:00 PM)


    All dissolved in the wine of hope,
    For the hungry thirsty living hearts! nice liens...10

    yes all are live with hope
    with the fear not to flop
    with life's show
    and it should smoothly go
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  • Amitava Sur (4/5/2015 3:13:00 AM)


    very good theme of unity in diversity is depicted in those lines, what talks about humanity not differentiating.Thanks to both you and Akhtar vai. (Report) Reply

  • Uma Ram (4/2/2015 3:31:00 AM)


    Awesome poem sir. Beautiful imagery.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/29/2015 7:15:00 AM)


    Poet Akhtar Jawad and Poet Ramesh Rai get a big applause for the culminating philosophy of life which brings all humanity together. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/28/2015 2:29:00 AM)


    Dear Ramesh Rai,
    In the third line the word the has been typed twice. Kindly edit it out. Thanks for your acknowlegement.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/27/2015 2:07:00 PM)


    Very beautiful poem. Very nicely envisioned. I like this poem. Many thanks respected sir. .....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 26, 2015



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