Submission Poem by ramesh rai


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Submission is the only way
to get rid of all pains
when the life is full of sorrow
heart is confined with darkness
then a ray of submission
can only enlighten your heart
to make you realise
the eternal love peace and joys
submission needs not an individual
but submission to your soul
integral part of the Almighty.

Friday, March 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
Kelly Kurt 20 March 2015

Thank you for sharing this thought

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2015

Definitely to get recovery from all pains submission to Almighty is only the way. Very beautifully drafted poem shared really. Nice one.10.

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Jitesh Shah 23 March 2015

very nice poem sir i like it and also read my poems

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 March 2015

Submit yourself all body and soul to enlighten your heart. A great hypothesis to practice quality life. Thank you.

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Ken E Hall 03 April 2015

Great wise thoughts for the heart and soul life is not always what you make it you have to regards

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Rebecca Navarre 07 September 2017

A Beautifully Wonderful Poem! ! ! ! ! ! Excellent Ending Line! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 23 April 2016

Submission to the Almighty is a blessing- submission to people may not be as honorable depending on the circumstances.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2015

Submit and greet all ups and down you shall always love own

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James Mclain 24 July 2015

Walking the edge edges sharp submission an act of what evil men pray while their is some good left whom do stand up straight.. iip

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Kewayne Wadley 19 June 2015

I enjoyed this! Much truth spoken in this piece

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