ramesh rai

Gold Star - 26,493 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Submission - Poem by ramesh rai

Submission is the only way
to get rid of all pains
when the life is full of sorrow
heart is confined with darkness
then a ray of submission
can only enlighten your heart
to make you realise
the eternal love peace and joys
submission needs not an individual
but submission to your soul
integral part of the Almighty.

Topic(s) of this poem: peace

Form: Ode

Comments about Submission by ramesh rai

  • Flower Navarre (9/7/2017 10:54:00 PM)

    A Beautifully Wonderful Poem! ! ! ! ! ! Excellent
    Ending Line! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! !
    Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Susan Williams (4/23/2016 12:26:00 PM)

    Submission to the Almighty is a blessing- submission to people may not be as honorable depending on the circumstances. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/10/2015 2:28:00 AM)

    and greet
    all ups and down
    you shall always love own
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  • Is It Poetry James Mclain (7/24/2015 12:03:00 PM)

    Walking the edge
    edges sharp
    submission an act
    what evil men pray
    while their is some good
    whom do
    stand up straight.. iip
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  • Kewayne Wadley (6/19/2015 5:31:00 AM)

    I enjoyed this! Much truth spoken in this piece (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (5/26/2015 12:20:00 PM)

    Soul is the integral part of The Almighty, and submission in the sense of resignation is the only solution! Thanks for sharing, it's simple and effective write up! (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/23/2015 5:32:00 AM)

    The greatness of submission is here eloquently expressed. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (4/20/2015 7:27:00 PM)

    This is a very good write in humility. To be humble
    and submissive to the creator brings about peace
    of mind and soul. Lovely.
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  • (4/3/2015 10:34:00 PM)

    Great wise thoughts for the heart and soul life is not always what you make it you have to give...in
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/29/2015 7:19:00 AM)

    Submit yourself all body and soul to enlighten your heart. A great hypothesis to practice quality life. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Jitesh Shah (3/23/2015 9:39:00 PM)

    very nice poem sir i like it and also read my poems (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/21/2015 7:13:00 PM)

    Definitely to get recovery from all pains submission to Almighty is only the way. Very beautifully drafted poem shared really. Nice one.10. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (3/20/2015 9:53:00 PM)

    Thank you for sharing this thought (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 20, 2015

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