Submission is the only way
to get rid of all pains
when the life is full of sorrow
heart is confined with darkness
then a ray of submission
can only enlighten your heart
to make you realise
the eternal love peace and joys
submission needs not an individual
but submission to your soul
integral part of the Almighty.
very nice poem sir i like it and also read my poems
Definitely to get recovery from all pains submission to Almighty is only the way. Very beautifully drafted poem shared really. Nice one.10.
Thank you for sharing this thought
Soul is the integral part of The Almighty, and submission in the sense of resignation is the only solution! Thanks for sharing, it's simple and effective write up!
A Beautifully Wonderful Poem! ! ! ! ! ! Excellent Ending Line! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! !
Submission to the Almighty is a blessing- submission to people may not be as honorable depending on the circumstances.
Submit and greet all ups and down you shall always love own
Walking the edge edges sharp submission an act of what evil men pray while their is some good left whom do stand up straight.. iip
I enjoyed this! Much truth spoken in this piece
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Submit yourself all body and soul to enlighten your heart. A great hypothesis to practice quality life. Thank you.