Twin Cinquains - Birds/Animals Poem by Patricia Grantham

Good read.....But it is not clear to me what you wished to convey to the reader through the cinquains. Perhaps I missed the point....

We must learn about all characteristics from our friends around. Thank you.

Nice palanquins one feather and the other is with foot

So, within the compact frame of Cinquains, you have summarized all cardinal and common traits of birds and animals alike... Enjoyed! !

Truly beautiful, fully embracing and emboldening the very aspects of each.

animals are good

.its good to observe animals, as in many aspects they are better than we are............a true to bring out such qualities.bien

True words to describe our fellow animals and the qualities we see in them and in turn in ourselves.

lovely cinquains. nice imagery.

Lovely picture -writing of human characters on the cinque - so many faces in one entity.....humble vs ferocious / wise vs. cunning...... love it.