Theodora (Theo) Onken

Gold Star - 25,323 Points (Washington State)

Two Hearts~ - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Do not leave me now my love - my darling

For i have waited for thee in a most lofty place

Come bring me forth unto the light of our heaven

For i swoon at the mere sight of your face

In your company - i am transported

Into the vault of ecstacys eternal flame

Floating through ethereal skies of contentment

Whenever - i hear - the mere mention of your name

You are as the magic of a sunny day

Inducing all of me into a most fervent trance

Gliding above in the Firmaments love garden-i am

Tarry not my love-as we come together-at last- we dance

By, Theodora Onken

April 2,2015

* Spring is here and love is in the air
** Dedicated to new lovers everywhere.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Form: Ode

Comments about Two Hearts~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Theodora Onken (4/28/2015 8:14:00 PM)

    Mj. Thank you so very much. You are always so generous with your comments. (Report)Reply

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  • Mj Lemon (4/10/2015 3:37:00 PM)

    Such excellent writing...Only thing I can say is...such a great love poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Theodora Onken (4/3/2015 11:41:00 PM)

    Princess, thank you for your wonderful review of this poem. It is so very much appreciated. (Report)Reply

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  • Theodora Onken (4/3/2015 2:45:00 AM)

    Thank you so very much Sandra. Writing about love is one of my favorite things to do. Inspiration - is the Spring and the perhaps awakening of two new loves in my family.
    Love all of your poetry and plan on reading more of it. Thank you, again, Sandra.

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  • Sandra Feldman (4/3/2015 12:31:00 AM)

    Poets love, Love
    But not all can speak of It,
    And make hearts really throb.
    As is the case,
    For this lovely poem of 2 hearts,
    Beating as One.

    Theodora Onken(4/3/2015 2:41:00 AM)

    Sandra, thank you so much. My inspiration - the Spring and the maybe awakening of new love in my family. Love your poetry so very much. Need to read more of it and comment. Am guilty of not doing that.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 3, 2015

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