Unaccomplished Poem by Jacqui Broad

Unaccomplished



All of my life,
I've been searching,
looking to find
that inner-peace.
But after so many,
longing years,
I shake my head -
I did not accomplish...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcus Mckinley 17 October 2011

the first line is only true if you continually live in the past. learn from it and move on into your future accomplishment. there is where you will find, create, discover the existance of your inner peace.

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Stefanie Fontker 16 October 2011

No one truly grasps 'inner peace.' To me, the purpose of life, of living, is to get as close to inner peace and happiness as possible, even though, truly they are one and the same. Once you have grazed it, inner peace, you must always keep on stretching your arms out, falling away, and then grazing it, again, and again. This is what makes life, life. I'm sure it is in your view, or at least peripheral vision. The key is to recognize what is it, and touch it, love it.

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Vipins Puthooran 16 October 2011

Peace is everywhere if we search we can reach... Peace lies in its harmony, but our mind is in disharmony...but this' s a nice poem and at the end it's seemed to me that you did find out peace and your hope is still unaccomplished but I think you are still in search of peace... Plz read my poem (if you search, you can reach) .

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