Unblemish Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Unblemish Love
Her body is a melting pot
On the silken sheet
with pillow beneath
trying hard to hold spinning head
temperature falling
heartbeat rising
body heat ignites the fumes
smell of love
in the air and everywhere
hairs like desert of vast eternity
with dunes of desires
despair was meager to obliterate
yearning to slurp those juicy lips
yet he dare not to ignite mutual flames.
Climax turned to anticlimax. Nice way to end with 360 degree twist
A very sensual poem nicely written till the very end and the twist and the turn at the and make this poem very interesting.Full stars
Love is unblemish. We are to be blamed for making it lustful.
Bodies heat and minds calmness a deadly combination I see a philosophical undertone in this poem.
This is justly brilliant....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.
Mutual flame ignites the path of love. The perception can talk more about another perception of love. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned..5 stars..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 9:55:06 PM # 1.0.0
Words were magical.... smell of love in the air and everywhere hairs like desert of vast eternity with dunes of desires despair was meager to obliterate