Unblemish Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Unblemish Love

Rating: 5.0


Her body is a melting pot
On the silken sheet
with pillow beneath
trying hard to hold spinning head
temperature falling
heartbeat rising
body heat ignites the fumes
smell of love
in the air and everywhere
hairs like desert of vast eternity
with dunes of desires
despair was meager to obliterate
yearning to slurp those juicy lips
yet he dare not to ignite mutual flames.

Wednesday, October 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,sensual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 14 October 2020

Beautiful emotional pour. Good unblemished love. Thank-you sir.

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 October 2020

DJ like the tone and the flow of the poem In The End DJ got a surprise that nothing happened only with a sweet description it and it

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 October 2020

DJ like the tone and the flow of the poem In The End DJ got a surprise that nothing happened only with a sweet description it and it...5

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S H 14 October 2020

No blame on love ultimately it is the winner we are the loser because we do not differentiate between love and

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Zuzu Mutairi 14 October 2020

Bodies heat and minds calmness a deadly combination I see a philosophical undertone in this poem.

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Barbara Bush 16 October 2020

Lovely sensual poem with twisted and controlled ending.

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Ricky Manhatten 16 October 2020

Super poem, till the very end you kept guessing.10

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Anjandev Roy 16 October 2020

This is justly brilliant....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2020

Mutual flame ignites the path of love. The perception can talk more about another perception of love. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned..5 stars..

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 October 2020

melting pot on a silken sheet with infinite potential.

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