Uncertain Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Uncertain

Rating: 5.0


I was like a paper boat
Loaded with innocence
Started the voyage on
The sea of time….
To a destination unknown
With much trials and
Tribulations; with my brow
Crushing against treacherous
Tides I moved on…..
I had onslaughts by
The heavy rain drops
And threatening dark
Clouds and thunders
To unfold myself like a
Lost soul and fall flat as
A carcass in the depth of
Nothingness I have never
Dreamt of a life so uncertain.

Friday, July 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 27 July 2018

Life itself is uncertain. It snatches our innocence and throw us in the sea of uncertainty. Beautifully described poem. Compliments.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2018

The first two lines are captivating! Wonderful use of simile..a beautiful poem! (10)

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2018

Yeah, I feel that too. Thanks very much.

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Bharati Nayak 27 July 2018

I was like a paper boat Loaded with innocence Started the voyage on The sea of time…. To a destination unknown- - - - - Life is so uncertain- - Destination unknown- - A beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2018

Thanks very much for reading and sweet comment. Regards.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2018

Life on Earth is just like a paper boat. This floats and this moves on. There is no certainty in this life. An amazing perceptional poem is brilliantly penned....10

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2018

Humble thanks Sir. I am glad you liked it.

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