Unchanging Beauty Poem by Fay Slimm

Unchanging Beauty

Rating: 5.0


The pool glistens,
Silence speaks
This morning,
And I listen.

Robin comes.
Elegant swans
Flotilla to my side
Eyes shyly wide.

The woods whisper,
Freshly crisp
From early rain.
I listen again.

Squirrel bright-eyes
Runs for nut prize
Birds in trees
Hypnotize me

The atmosphere
Elates here
Changeless wait.
Cold abates.

Springtime firsts.
Soundless burst
To mystify me.
How serene.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 21 January 2009

awesome write..probably the Robin sings nicely that inspired you...10

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Scott Austin 27 January 2009

Nature is a beautiful thing to watch and ponder; thank you for sharing your wonderful penned with us. Scott

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Randy Hogan 21 January 2009

the only thing would makes this poem more lovely....if you could read it to me.. thank you for the beautiful words you form in to poetry........

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 January 2009

wonderful! ! ! keep writing! ! ! could you read and comment on mine too, specially Life (Process of Enigma) ? Thank you.

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Kris Smith 21 January 2009

Beautiful poem Fay well captured 10 ++++ cHRIS

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 21 January 2009

A song to be sung alway... Andy 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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