Uncommon Sense Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Uncommon Sense

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If there is no beginning how may end
advance as foe, be welcome found as friend -
for if the wheel turns all's spun pattern which
must weave itself through every thread and stitch,
Thus if there is no wheel what cares can mend
cares' mirage cares, last bend loops round next bend.
Ensure what's done is fun, spent full and rich,
as for regrets: there is no tent to pitch...

18 April 2005 retitled with minor changes 2 May 2008 -
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for previous version see below

If there is no beginning how can end
advance as foe, be welcome found as friend -
for if the wheel turns all's spun pattern which
must weave itself through every thread and stitch,
Thus if there is no wheel what cares can mend
the cares of cares - there's only one last bend!
Ensure what's done is fun, spent full and rich,
as for regrets no tent is there to pitch!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M S 21 December 2006

I have come to the conclusion that I really enjoy your 2005 vintage poetry. Its crisp original and to the point. 'Ensure what's done is fun' now those are the words to live by!

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