Under This Shed Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Under This Shed

Rating: 5.0

Under this shed of tree in this winter,
Grey soil dreams more in beauty veil,
Big mountains dream under this shed,
Shed of this tree is dreamy in weather.

Below mountains in this beautiful valley,
This cute town tells us about workshop,
Mountains are roofed by the leaves of tree,
Sky is clear for new vision to write more.

From far we see and capture living image,
Beauty gives fragrance of blooming in light,
Newness is sprinkled and light is sparked,
Everywhere green scene spreads its wings.

Breeze of winter does veil the moment of life,
Little coldness we feel with warmness of day,
Every building looks like princess in love,
Every soul meditates for light of dignity.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,20 December 2017. All rights reserved.

Under This Shed
Wednesday, December 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,morning,nature,perception
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,19 December 2017. All rights reserved.
Rajnish Manga 21 December 2017

The poem brings out the beauty of a scenery touched by wintry winds. Thanks for this exquisitely crafted poem with some lovely expressions, such as: 'Every building looks like princess in love'

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Akhtar Jawad 01 January 2018

Beauty of a winter morning so nicely painted in colorful lines, a lovely poem.

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Mj Lemon 26 December 2017

Magnificent, Kumarmani. For me, this poem is all about perspective. The tree no longer occupies a place, a patch of earth....It serves to frame and hold and define all the elements around it. That tree is a centre of its universe. A great poem; a 10.

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Feipeng Shang 23 December 2017

A poetic way to see The bright side of winter

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 December 2017

It’s a beautiful poem! The picturesque beauty of winter is very neatly expressed. Finally, the last two lines, “Every building looks like princess in love/every soul meditates for light of dignity” delve our mind into sheer tranquility and glee! Thanks dear sir for sharing! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 December 2017

In beauty veil Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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