Underground Poem by Bill Cantrell

Underground

Rating: 5.0

What is poetry?
We are a mouse,
wandering aimlessly,
seeking passage through its maze
Yes, a labyrinth of much more than words 

Under a verse, 
there are layers of many seasons 

Precious buried treasures 

Love letters incognito, 

in tune to the strings of a kindred spirit

Thoughts birthing the next stanza 

The beauty of poetry is, 
we need not to understand her words, 

one is in want to feel embraced

for poetry must have mystery, 

but at the same time, 
we need to feel it breathing in our ear

Holding our face to its, 

eye contact confirms each other's wants 

Yes, poetry is indeed intriguing,
and hot

Its meter is not for the unsteady

It's metaphor is not mere slapstick shadows in the third verse,
It is deep and holds us once we peer into its eyes 

Yes, corridors leading to many rooms and beds 

Indeed, 

much more than words

Tuesday, November 14, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: metaphor,poetry,seasons,seeking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A revamped poem from 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 21 November 2023

Never read a better description of poetry. Top marks!

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2) Tagore said "the difficulty is that words have meanings. That is why poets have to set them in meter and verse so that the meanings are suppressed and the feelings come out."

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" The beauty of poetry is, 
we need not to understand her words, 
 one is in want to feel".. should be what Rabindranath Tagore said "The difficulty is that words have meanings…."(Contd"

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Rebecca Navarre 09 January 2024

Quite mesmerizing! .. Ever so very many 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 09 January 2024

Beautiful, mysterious, and yet heart touching, drawing the reader in like true poetry does! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 09 January 2024

Magnificently worded! .. Love the way you capture the essence of poetry! ..

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