Unerased Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

meaningful and emotion-laden a poetry...good writing

Beautiful... simply beautiful.

wow, thats all i gotta say. it was awesome

this piece is great, well penned, lines at least runs smoothly, good flow. One of your critics pointed out the use of 'shred' meaning broken pieces of something, fragments whatever. To use 'shards' it didn't make any difference, these words are nouns not verbs.For me it depends to the author how he uses these words. We're not constructing perfect sentences on poetry. It depends on how the reader interpret the meaning of the piece created. For all you know poets are artists. It up to him how he carves his idea on a piece of wood or how he paints his masterpiece on a canvas. So.move on, mate.

A perfect verse certainly unerased in eternity of the poetic world. This is beauty, indeed. Thanks for sharing, Obinna. More than 10. Yelena M.

Wonderfully written. Great.

Wonderfully done and expressed. Loved this one. laurel

it's wonderful to have a feeling like this.

Absolutely great form and theme! Thanks for sharing.

My dear friend, you are just great. Words are not sufficient to express how much I feel. YOu have written very beautifully...................You are simply surpassing excellence.