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Unfaithful

Rating: 5.0

Shock paralyzes me.
Denies me speech.
Heat flares up, simmers.
Hatred.
Cold embraces me now, shivers.
Numbness.
My eyes focus, unfocus,
focus again,
refusing the image.
You.Her.She.Him.

My heart doesn't want to understand,
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Jay Boyd 24 March 2009

wow! can you write more? that was a good poem very enticing.

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Allan Macli Borges 12 June 2009

it's really a very good work, i regret take so much time to come on it...10.

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Ty Robertson 23 May 2009

Wonderful write, It seems you captured the moment perfectly. Like a picture captures time. I really enjoy your work. It can be related by many.

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Sicelo Sithole 25 March 2009

A very nice poem indeed, well done Londi.10+++

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Pablo Cruise 24 March 2009

Flood of emotion in such a little cup. Nice one, Londiwe

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Kevin Fisher 24 March 2009

I didn't really like this one sorry but keep trying your other poems are great

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