Unforgettable Night Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Unforgettable Night

Rating: 4.3


That special night,
She gave me a big surprise
When she made me feel
Like in paradise
By kissing me passionately
And holding me tight,
Turning that unpredictable moment
Into an endless night!

That night,
I witnessed a volcano's erosion
Filled with lust and emotion
And like an opened-book,
She needed no instruction,
All my strength she took,
Leaving me completely dried
And with concoctions!

That gracious night,
She became like a slot-machine,
Behaving like a wild teen
And forgetting the age and pride,
We both felt fully fulfilled…

That night became
One of a kind,
Stamped forever
In my heart and mind…
Now, I hope to see her again
And repeat that exciting scene
That made me insane!

New York City
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 25 November 2012

Passionate indeed. - I hope you get your repeat scene.

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Hazel Durham 20 November 2012

This is full of raw unrestrained passion with great imagery, loved it. Inspired write! !

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Aaron Lynn 19 November 2012

Very intimate! Along with a perfect ending.8/10

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eloida Capuno 18 November 2012

Some nights are just that... Unforgettable! (Wink)

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