Unity Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Unity

Rating: 4.9


We shall not be discouraged
From acting together,
By our differences in faith,
Color and race.
Our prejudices must be cast away,
And like the strings of a guitar,
UNITED,
We can create a song,
So alluring
And everlasting.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

Rose Marie, do you ever get tired of seeing yourself referred to by 'his' on PH when a Notification says 'Rose Marie Juan-austin has made this poem one of HIS favorites? ? ? : )

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Hey Bri! 12 September 2022

Hey Bri you're spamming the comments section. You selfish piglet. Shut up!

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

ONE definition of 'PREJUDICED': 'The act or state of holding unreasonable preconceived judgments or convictions.' WHO GETS TO say WHAT IS 'unreasonable'? ?

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

I like the poem. But doing away with 'prejudice' (which I doubt will EVER happen as long as we a 'human') will NOT end all wars and lesser conflicts.: (

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Bri Edwards 12 September 2022

For example, sickle-cell anemia occurs mostly in African Americans, so it is an identifying characteristic of that race. Color covers the pigmentation of the skin.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 29 December 2022

Very well expressed. Reverberating melody

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Kevin Patrick 22 November 2022

What harmony we can make if we could all get along. I envy the thought you had, humanity as a string of chords. Thats great creativity there. L

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Susan Williams 10 October 2022

the reference to the strings of a guitar was EXACTLY well done! ! ! It gives a visual and auditory light to this poem--awesome write. Top marks! ! !

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Indira Renganathan 19 September 2022

Beautiful poem on the importance of unity

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Rebecca Navarre 14 September 2022

Our prejudices must be cast away, creating such a beautiful song of beauty, peace, and heart! .. Amazing! .. So Awesome! .. Way Beyond #'S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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