Universal Show Poem by David Taylor

Universal Show

Rating: 5.0


Ever been to one of those
water fountain shows?
You know with music and lights
and water spouts, at night.
Shifting towers of water shoots
with coloured lights
and music themed.
Left, right
Low, high
Pulsing, showering,
swirling, churning,
light shades shifting,
colours turning.
Excited child like faces
beaming with all the
wondrous feelings.
Gentle now with pastel shades
and trickling fountains,
soft spays are made.
And drums beating,
gushing higher brighter reds, .
with huge cascades
high above our heads.
Now a ballet dancing,
to a Mozart minuet,
this one that one
which one next?
Dancing in a spiral movement,
graceful do the waters flow.
Now a sense of anticipation
waters gentle, lights go low:
Wow the lights and music blow!
Every spout with water gushes
with loud crescendos;
end of show!
We go home with uplifted feelings,
having seen the waters dancing
and had our senses reeling:
Life is such a magic screening,
and a wondrous seeming.
As the waters, lights and music
come, perform and surely go.
We continue silent witness,
to this universe; and what a show!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 27 March 2007

Well I don't know about anyone else, but I wish I'd worn a raincoat! Absolutely soaked and saturated with images David. Ta. Danny

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Marci Made 27 March 2007

Positively delightful and as always you put a smile on my face...now this is an event I'd love to witness, such fun...............marci.xo

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JoAnn McGrath 27 March 2007

I have to agree with Angie your poems always make me smile Rhythm of the words make you feel like your right there watching the water bouncing around playfully splashing.

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Michelle Tiddy 27 March 2007

Beautiful David! Made me smile and really made me feel as if I were there! ! Great stuff! M.

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Original Unknown Girl 27 March 2007

Superb David, you absolutely brought this to life! Thanks for this poem, it was a wonder to read and participate in! HG: -) xx

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Tranquil Ocean 27 March 2007

Enjoyed the water show...saw one years ago but yours was better! ! Love...TO

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