Unknown, Outcome Poem by Sandra Feldman

Unknown, Outcome

Rating: 5.0


A poem
Is like a cake,
No matter,
How many times
You've made it
You really,
Don't know
How it will
Turn out,
Until,
You make it
And taste it.

Monday, November 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: light,poem,silly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 18 November 2019

I like light, silly poems. I like them so much please Sandra can I have another piece? And I love the message. Thank you for writing and above all, sharing this little gem.10++ and added to my sweet tooth poem tin.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2019

I totally agree with my friend Bernard, this sweet poem itself is like a cake...an endearing little poem! Full marks!

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 November 2019

A very apt comparison, poetry is always like that. It is in your hand to write, but it is meant for the readers, the outcome is unpredictable.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 November 2019

A sweet poem is like a piece of cake. I love it, dear Ma’am Sandra....10++

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