Unsent Poem Poem by true little angel

Unsent Poem

Rating: 4.8


two thousands and nine
i will never be fine
no heart's warm or kind
nowhere good i can find
to live in
with no sin

even you
you were a dream
sweet dream....
but wasnt true

two thousands and nine
they said: 'happy new year'
but no sign
of happiness here...

even though,
my best wishes
for you dear
i hope you are fine.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 28 January 2009

Even though you say that there is no love in him, you still have best wishes for him. That is what true love really is. Thank you for sharing. A 10+. Love & hugs, Barbara

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it would a great year for you. Read my piece called, bye bye, you wretch (farewell to 2008) ciao mi amiga Leslie

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Alma Cortez 06 March 2009

Beautiful sounds like ur broken but still in love

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ata khan 17 April 2009

Poignant, but still with a sweet ending. I really like the last stanza. Thanks for sharing.

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 02 March 2010

Well organised ideas, this is a good poem.

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Iron Panda 23™ 02 March 2010

beautifully written! !

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this is an amazing poem i can tell that there is a lot of motion in this

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Jerry Hughes 29 September 2009

I understand why you used the title now, you shouldn't have sent it, it's terrible. However, cheers, Jerry

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Elias Galvez 19 August 2009

sweey lil poem. short candid and sweet-you are true poetess

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