Until... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Until...

Rating: 5.0

Out in the woods walking
amongst the pines. In the
beauty of life's springtime.
I was yours and you were
mine. So beautifully through
the shaded trees the sun
did shine. Now the willow tree
forever sleeps. And from now, , ,
until our hands touch and our
eye's again meet... My heart
shall cry out, ache and weep.
The cry of a wolf, the howl of the
wind, the call of a whippoorwill
with such sadness within...

Until...
Tuesday, April 21, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: family,howl,loss,love,woods
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ja Kocham czie~Miluji te
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Timber Koleden 04 May 2026

The mix of happiness and love and serenity evoke such a wonderful memory! Thank you for this wonderful poem!

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Timber Koleden 04 May 2026

More picturesque and brilliantly touching than I can say! The vivid imagery drops the reader right in the scene!

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Anjandev Roy 21 April 2026

This is beautifully written...... wonderful to read......

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Rob Lamberton 21 April 2026

Beauty that we howl for!

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Adeeb AlFateh 21 April 2026

with love everything is beautiful and every time is springtime as well as without love everything is sadness

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 May 2026

Beautiful Rebecca xx Thanks for sharing

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Rob Lamberton 11 May 2026

A weeping willow. I'll have to pine over this one a while!

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Richard Wlodarski 10 May 2026

2) In your Poet's Notes, I initially thought that you were writing in Polish (first three words) . But I didn't recognize the last three because they are written in Czech. I interpret them to mean both romantic love and love of God.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 May 2026

The contrasts of emotions within the very vivid imagery of Mother Nature is spellbinding! Such an amazing poem!

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Timber Koleden 04 May 2026

I like your mention of the willow tree! I wonder, were you referencing the song 'Willow'? That is one of my favorite love songs of all!

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