Untouchable Poem by Ruchi chaurasiya
Untouchable
Untouchable…, yes that's what I thought I am.
I close all the doors, drop all the curtains
Covered every inch of gap on the way to my heart.
I decided last time was the last time
This time walls are unbreakable and I am untouchable.
All of sudden an intense gaze trapped me
A whisper underneath my ear hit on a strong door of my defence.
I was untouchable behind the doors but still felt touched by him.
Not my body but he touched my soul like no one else.
An ecstasy and a fear was there, I was tickled and thrilled at a same time.
Looked at him and thought "He looks like my next mistake".
I was hiding my body and he took my soul.
I was manipulating my words and he reads my eyes.
I was saving my lips and he kissed my heart.
Don't know exact moment when I was gone.
Late nights, heavier eyes and intense conversation coming right from naked soul took me to next level of intimacy.
Yes, now he is gone too, and hit even harder.
I didn't close the doors, didn't drop curtains.
Last time I felt drowned.
But this time I ask everyone - "can you make me drown even more? ? ? "
A good start with a nice poem, Ruchi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Original, fresh and heartbreaking with mesmerising lines, actually brilliant lines
“ …Cover every inch of gap …”.. “Covered” favorite line so far: A whisper underneath my ear hit on a strong door of my defense. [[ your PH photo makes me think of seeing a very young and shapely Bollywood movie starlet sitting as a guest on a TV 'talk show'. ]] (cont.)
I laughed at 'But this time I ask everyone - 'can you make me drown even more? ? ? ' ' [silently laughed] Excellent! ! ! bri : )
(CONT.) This poem is soulfully-sensual. I hope you got at least ONE GOOD kiss (a 'real one') before yout 'broke up' aka ended the relationship! ! !
Though I've commented in the past, I NOW send this to 'my favourites' and give it ***** five stars. (CONT.)
An ecstasy and a fear was there, I was tickled and thrilled at a same time. Looked at him and thought He looks like my next mistake. I was hiding my body and he took my soul. Can you make me drown even more...........love, dreams, romance, intensity. passion....... fine poem. tony
Original, deep and heartbreaking as you feel untouchable after been hurt once before but with mesmerising lines and they are actually brilliant lines you fall in love again to be left hurt once more. This poem is going on my favourite poem list and thank you for inviting me to read this superb write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2024 3:32:21 PM # 1.0.0
Wow dear poet, what a lovely and sensational poem. Would love to quote these lines of yours dear Ruchi.. A whisper underneath my ear hit on a strong door of my defense. I was untouchable behind the doors but still felt touched by him. Not my body but he touched my soul like no one else. An ecstasy and a fear was there, I was tickled and thrilled at a same time. 10+++ for the sharing. Subhas