Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Upon The Shaded River Bank Comments

Rating: 5.0

Upon the shaded river bank
Where willows weep on water's edge,
And drape the sympathetic shore
That to my heart shall yield,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 06 April 2008

Lovely mixture of nature and love in such a charming and sweet write. the pleasure is mine. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 28 March 2008

And if there was a way of saying it, then perhaps this is it, the heartache that you endured but wait Andrew, is that a glimpse of light I see on the horizen? Great poetry my friend Love duncan X

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Gwilym Williams 06 February 2008

Shades of Ophelia? Reflections in deep waters? Numerology? Promises of wealth? Is willow (2nd line) really meant to be singular or plural? Do you mean either/or or both (i.e.all) - where willow/s weep/s perhaps? Best bardic wishes, Gwilym Williams

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Thad Wilk 05 February 2008

This poem to me is a sparkling gem, delightfully captured through your pen! *10*! ! Best regards Friend Thad

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Lesley Sutherland 05 February 2008

A lovely read, thank you.

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