Valentine Without You Comments

I can so feel your pain in this piece. I so stopped breathing myself when I got half way through. Sometimes we find ourselves so in love it is difficult to see into tomorrow. But alas tomorrow does shine a hopeful light. Very well written.

Love so strong and sentiments sooooooooooo sad. Well written.

You have really put your heart and soul in this beautiful piece... A little long though but I think one can't stop thoughts flowing like a Nile when it really come through a heart full of love... Well done..

wow a really nice poem this touchhhhhhhed me anjali

A poem with perfect rhythm and natural flow and love with all its intensity and purity, divine love. Although a long poem but kept me spell bound. CP

l ove does awake i n Valentine Day l et everybody celebrates! G od knows our hearts a loved one we always care l et your heart celebrates today, even without the one you loved.

Poem has alot of heart felt truths in it.

excellently penned but a little too long. CP

a very beautiful poem indeed full of emotions

a wonderful soliloquy...written deep from the heart...emotion in full bloom and thats this made the poem beautiful...10

Emotion at its finest...I could hear your heart speak with amazing flow that seems to just ooze from within you........wonderful poetess 10+++++ Best of Health & Happiness Jon

You have penned a diary my dear.......... Why is it easy to fall in love And yet so hard to be loved back? Why should i feel such if destiny permits me not? Why do i have to fall if its you i can’t have? Why is there a you in me but never a me in you? It is so easy to fall inlove...yes it is true... and yet so hard to be loved back...why? ? ? Because the love you both have is not 'true love'... and he is not the one really meant for you....Man comes and goes to our life, many times to feel a broken heart until such time you'll be able to meet the right man for you...your destiny...some women find their true love early, some late and some are destined to be alone after a long journey of finding true love...Oh! don't find it, it will come to you in God's time......... heartfelt my dear.....10/10

I personally like this poem. There is a lot of conversation within the self and love is expressed too much in detail. It appears that the author wants to talk for a long time to her love. Still she has been able to manage to express her true emotions. Fine rythme here. A 10 from me.