Venom Poem by Robert Miller

Venom

Rating: 4.3
 


sunshine's gone, september is on its way
all the leaves are facing decay
my feelings seem to do the same
as i'm alone, whispering your name

december beckons, i'm depressed and sad
i just want to tell you that i miss you bad
the radio says 'all i want for christmas is you'
well, this has been my thought too

you return in april, sweet surprise
that's what you call blessing in disguise
i see your eyes, it feels not right
truth and understanding are visiting tonight

june is gone, it's summer again
sunshine is slowly edging rain
the facts came through the backdoor
that i don't love you anymore

summer or winter, warm or cold
i found today what i had sold
i destroyed the venom inside me
finally i feel really free
i removed the pictures from the wall
i'm not longer waiting for your call
i'm healed, i'm free, i'm painless
everyday i need you less and less

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 16 November 2008

.....................you've made your point loud and clear

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 June 2008

This is a very interesting poem and I recommend it to everyone. The change in mood is quit startling and it was done in one line. This is even more fascinating, as 'Spock' would say. What a poem! GW62

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Viola Grey 07 June 2008

'the facts came through the backdoor, that i don't love you anymore'...fantastic line, it turns everything around wonderfully...great work.

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Julia Bond 06 June 2008

this is really good (:

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