View From The Summit Poem by Susan Lacovara

View From The Summit

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A small boy with a view
From the Everest summit
of his father's shoulders
Passed me while peering
Down the double lined road
He a jovial jockey
Whose steps were two small
To keep up with his Daddy's pace
Big small toothed smile on his face
Seated upon his makeshift throne
I thought him no more than two
As this union of two
A child with little worries
A father with shoulders to carry them
Should ever they arise
We dipped a nod as courtesy
To what seemed a perfect match
Senior and junior
Under the bounce of blue sky
Strolling together
By the stride of one
Heading in the direction
Of making memories
They will always know
To be theirs
Come whatever mountains
To climb

Monday, May 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fathers
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(05/05/14) I remember my father giving me the very same ride....I felt like I was taller than all the world!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kewayne Wadley 15 May 2014

Beautiful story! I loved the usage of the mountain, the father and the son Nicely done!

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Yash Shinde 09 May 2014

so beautifully crafted my dear! I loved the way u used visual elements here. Its indeed a great feeling to behold the fellow men from above! ....

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Colleen Courtney 06 May 2014

Such a great poem with amazing visuals it creates. I too remember those days of riding high on Daddy's shoulders. Thanks for the beautiful memories.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

This is an amazing poem... Very well crafted..

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Smoky Hoss 05 May 2014

Marvelous mountain metaphor!

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