VINHIE AT GRANDMA's HOME….
Dear Vinhie,
come to grandma and stay,
we will play in the dunes,
because, just like Normandy,
it's a pleasant sunny day.
let's sit on the shiny sand
and of course we play a little,
and run over the grains of sand brittle
and we won't pick anything
even the worst blinq-blinq
be an easy grandson boy
as we usually play and enjoy
Grandma is very happy again
having seen, touched and hug you
you play the clown
tenderly with your head you tumble down
in your dad's time, judo sport
was only for the big boys,
though a few months only since Normandy,
your speech improves rapidly,
you gained many new words
yes, grandma observes and hears
my dear Vinhie deserves a grand applause
so many stories heard
many new songs
learned at your pré-school
and you have sung them all for grandma at home
time has changed you rapidly
my handsome Vinhie
grandma used to sing for you and tell the stories,
but now you are telling me the fairytales
we have enjoyed in the dunes,
we have walked along the North Sea,
you have asked grandma a very lot,
first clean our toes, then our shoes
and we go homeward bound again
you have added another sweet remembrances
to our family-pages
brand-new poetic stances
addition
to our family tradition
grandma's heart leaps up in condition....
© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Wednesday 18 November 2020
" sand brittle" fragile sand or sand candy? I especially liked: " grandma used to sing for you and tell the stories, but now you are telling me the fairytales" " .....enjoyed in the dunes" i'd use " enjoyed the dunes" or maybe " played in the dunes" bri :)
This poem is very beautiful and mind blowing. A grandmother's call and emotion we can notice. Vinhie, your grandson will definitely come into your lap and play. You will play in the dunes, because, just like Normandy's sunny day you have remembered the past time. Another sweet remembrances you can gain with greater hope. An excellent poem is well penned...5 stars.