Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 20,204 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Wait..... - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Waiting patiently
For the target to be achieved
Putting all the hard effort on it
Worked day and night on it.
Put complete dedication on it
Hard efforts was about to be rewarded
Just a final touch up
For the completion
A hurdle came on its way
The last hope of completing
The target was struck.
He became upset
and went into distress
Everything got over he said
And he gave up away.

Just a little patience
And confidence on self
Was only he needed...

At the end of the day
It can be said that....

At the last moment....
its like
Breaking the same pot with their own hands
which he had once moulded it with hard effort!


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Geetha Jayakumar.

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Comments about Wait..... by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/14/2018 7:22:00 PM)


    We have to wait patiently to the fruit of effort facing many hurdle. Hard effort has reward sure. Unless we do so it will be like broken pot. I quote...
    At the last moment....
    its like
    Breaking the same pot with their own hands
    which he had once moulded it with hard effort!
    A beautiful poem shared.
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  • Ramesh Rai (7/1/2013 9:51:00 AM)


    Breaking the pot with the own hands
    That once moulded the
    pot.
    a deep confliction here
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  • (7/1/2013 8:48:00 AM)


    A great poem, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (7/1/2013 7:43:00 AM)


    patience and confidence are necessary to get success.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 2, 2014


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