For a heart in love the life is a boon,
A glimpse of beloved is a glimpse of the moon,
Waiting for hours in emotional tide,
The lover when thinks to commit suicide,
And the beloved not yet at the meeting sight,
The evening grown up in a lonely night,
The stars whisper he's insane in love,
But his firmness not at all is wane in love,
His heart is sure she will come at last,
Fleeting of mind a complete contrast,
She will come, she will not, the petal now last,
To end at the latter, a deadly blast,
Quickly he said she will not she will come,
Cheating in love so sweet and awesome,
I'm sorry my love I am really so late,
He heard her voice at the garden's gate.
A Beautiful poem. Very true said, waiting is like killing time. Many thoughts which comes to mind especially while waiting, is beautifully expressed in this poem. I hope everyone had waited at least once or anytime in their lifetime. It really a sweet waiting, as it tests the patience of one who is waiting. Loved reading it.
waiting for someone you love means taking test of your patience.A lovely poem.
Waiting for hours in emotional tide, The lover when thinks to commit suicide, ..........................pain of love is the greatest pain...............beautiful
So, at last she has come, putting an end to his mounting anxiety and doubt! Interesting poem charged with sparks of love!
For a heart in love the life is a boon, A glimpse of beloved is a glimpse of the moon, Beautifully designed. I liked it very much
A sweet and beautiful melody on loving waiting of a beloved.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love clearly means patience which is created only through a indestructible relation or faith...........a mesmerizing poem.......good use of words..................very heart-touching............THANKS