(*) Unusual Stresses Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur

(*) Unusual Stresses

Rating: 2.9
 


I wanted to see you,
In dreams,
and always,
It lingers,
Like mists,
and smokes,
In spaces,
before my visions,
but in realities people,
find epmty mosaics,
filled with airs,
rather beautiful fluids,
Like wines of dreams,
so in a jiffy,
I saw you,
In a crowd,
like a cloud,
below a hot sun,
I felt everything drifting,
in my eyes,
i found my self,
alone,
and nothing,
alive around me,
I walked a journey,
on a barren road of life,
and smokes became still,
before my eyes,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 12 January 2010

before my visions nice lyric poem 10/10

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a passionated write..warm as usual

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Lady Grace 06 September 2009

this is well written..single powerful words means a lot.....has an authority to define the thought itself..very smart..BISMILLAH...

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Sahar Sahar 02 September 2009

well penned with deep emotions

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Rehana Nazli 01 September 2009

I walked a journey, on a barren road of life, and smokes became still, before my eyes, Very lovely and melodic poem..gave rise to the existential reality of being alone on the road of life.

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Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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