tired and hungry the beast still hunts me
he stalks in the shadows as life grows shallow
waiting for the days to get shorter so he can begin his slaughter
with hatred in his eye but his job on his mind
all i can do is waste this precious time
in other words im the hunted or even the prey
with nothing to do but wait for the hunter to come out and play
so to lead this good life he just might tempt me
for above or below i dont know where he will send me
but my faith in all of that is even a question
i think if something goes wrong is it a sign or just another life lesson
is my life even a blessing
but if i dont believe, when things go wrong why do i curse everything thats above
or prey so many times for another chance at love
but back to my stalking enemy or is he my walking friend
you see i feel like the last word in a sentence and my paragraph has come to an end
so instead of embracing life i wait for it to stop
tick tock tick tock
This is very meaningful and deep, just believe in what you think is right. Thank you. Love, Kat sorrow
this is priceless..its like the words are alive and the emotion is actually coming out at you..applause
'so instead of embracing life i wait for it to stop you conclude your poems in a beautiful way here too the finale is awesome ++10 anjali
'back to my stalking enemy or is he my walking friend? you see i feel like the last word in a sentence and my paragraph has come to an end'... these lines talk of imaginative poetry...beautuiful write, Keith...resembles Goethe's famous write...10
You amaze me everytime with your poems this one i love bc it shows who you really are and keith your life is a blessing bc you have showed me how to live life with no regrets. hadyn
'you see i feel like the last word in a sentence and my paragraph has come to an end/ so instead of embracing life i wait for it to stop/...' (i've been to that point of my life a few times. i love this poem. you are a very talented) Lee
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like it..deep. it's nice