Waiting For Her Knock Poem by Ernestine Northover

Waiting For Her Knock

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He leaned across and pulled the window closed,
What future would he have now, he supposed
If what he so desired could all come true,
He would no longer be downcast and blue,
But she was not even near, nowhere in sight,
The thought that she, with luck, perhaps just might
Keep to her word, had now become remote.
A tight restriction welled up in his throat.
She'd said she would arrive at two o'clock,
How nerve wracking this waiting for her knock,
But looking at the time, it now was five,
No good to still keep faith and hope alive.
It was obvious, she didn't want to know,
To his heart and pride, it was a vicious blow.
A tap upon the door, could that be her,
His whole dispirited being began to stir,
'Do you want to buy my pegs', the Gypsy said,
But he had fled!

© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 08 March 2006

This maintains great tension. Reminds me of Emily Dickinson's poem 'I years had been from home' (aka 'Home') , although from a different vantage point. -chuck

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Duncan Wyllie 05 March 2006

Poised on every word, I could imagine a time and a place where so many have felt this way.Brilliant Ernestine, You're A Star, Love Duncan.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 05 March 2006

The anticipation. The disappointment. Clearly here. Nice read.

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Peter A. Crowther 05 March 2006

What a terrible disappointment but a great poem! I enjoyed it

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