Walking In The Rain Poem by Sandra Martyres
Walking In The Rain
Walking in the Rain
Sharing an umbrella
A chance to get closer
And cling to each other
Without attracting the
Unwanted attention
And comments from
The city’s idle passers by
Whose furtive glances
Can spoil all chances
Of enjoying some quiet
Moments of togetherness and fun
Probably those furtive glance-casting others are envying your closeness..wishing they could share an umbrella with somebody..wonderful little synopsis of part of one day out of a life..(smile)
a lovely romantic poem sandra...could feel the drizzle...agree with jon this lovely short poem deserves more than a 10.....10
Whose furtive glances Can spoil all chances .............................. Aha....i dont' care either those furtive glances of passersby so long as i enjoy his company in my umbrella.This is cute.
Ben Geiske sent me a note about an umbrella. 'What a beautiful word, umbrella. A shade to be opened. However, in your case Sandra, it is a shade to be shut for a sprinkling of romance. Lovely poem. 10 Karin
i cant find enough words to express my love for this poem....its wonderful
Brilliant and beautiful, rich with the frustration and furtiveness of lovers desperate to find quiet and privacy in a noisy and intrusive cityscape.
gRRRRReat! umbrella is a powerful symbol too! and rain oh! all together a big WOW! 10+
How lovely. You and your close friend are in tune with the raindrops. This is enchanting, Sandra. Warm wishes, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/7/2025 10:13:06 PM # 1.0.0
Very nicely presented. This could actually be an extension of a haiku I read with the picture of two huddled under an umbrella.