Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Wall - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

We painted our wall orange in autumn
Dipping the brushes into white smiles.
You said, 'The fire of our navel
Will make it vermilion red by winter,
When the moonlit quilt will be torn
By passionate silhouettes of us.'
It is spring now my darling,
The wall is blemished with dark gray.
And my instinct has realized it well,
Walls are never meant to be decorated
But to be broken with arms of love.

Topic(s) of this poem: heartache, love and loss, sad love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Wall by Sanjukta Nag

  • Sumit Ganguly (11/5/2015 9:02:00 AM)

    Only strength of love can pen down such a positive attitude. Thank you for the poem Sanjukta. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/3/2015 12:12:00 AM)

    from sadness then comes happiness
    lovely -10
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  • Liza Sudina (11/2/2015 10:46:00 PM)

    We painted our wall orange in autumn - red by winter - grey bu spring! Oh! We don't change walls for many years!
    But to be broken with arms of love. - this is life!
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/2/2015 3:45:00 PM)

    Such an interesting and wise imagery is drawn here that amazes mind definitely. Painting wall with orange of Autumn is nice and interesting definitely. This is definitely a marvelous work shared....10 (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (11/2/2015 1:49:00 PM)

    fire of our navel such intensity....!! okay am coming to kolkata to take lessons from you (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/2/2015 1:08:00 PM)

    Seasons! With the muse of the walls. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/2/2015 1:06:00 PM)

    Wow so wonderfully written poem SN.....Walls are never meant to be decorated, But to be broken with arms of love.......... Lovely, Lovely and lovely....Beyond ratings. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

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