Wandering Child Poem by Deborah Cromer

Wandering Child

Rating: 4.5


Drifting thoughts continuing to wind
Up the future, beyond the past
Leaving everything behind
She journeys through time off ground
Leaving no trace and making
No sound
Into that place she can call only "there"
Returning with secrets
She will never share
Constantly wandering off as a child
She dreams of thoughts
Daring and wild
Instantly she begins to realize
Creating that familiar look
Of constant surprise

Saturday, June 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 20 August 2009

you have dug deep into the mind of a child, and pulled out their inner most thoughts and fantasies and also reached the realities. EXCELLENT WRITE! A DOUBLE TEN

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Nikunj Sharma 22 July 2009

drifting, swaying and flying high I see a child in the sky scaling horizon with her wings many a sweet thoughts, she brings...

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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