Wanting Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
Wanting
The scriptures say
Man is made of
Earth, Water, Fire
Atmosphere and Air
But science says
Two haploid gametes
Two incomplete cells
Merged together
To make me.
Maybe
They did not
Complement
Each other,
Left gaps.
Is that why
I still find me
Wanting?
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Faith is Hod leads us forward, to the ultimate destiny, beside Him. We need to strive and live worthy of His benevolence.
The Panchabhuta are Earth, Water, Fire Atmosphere and Air.
It is said that human body is built from Panchabhuta, the five great elements, also five physical elements namely, ‘
Our genetic makeup, which we have acquired through generations, decides what we are, mostly. There is little we can do about it.
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