War - 20 (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

War - 20 (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


War is a Brake

On the wheels of the Chariot of Civilization

Moving on its Ethereal Time line

Thursday, August 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: war,war and peace,war memories,warfare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Aparajita Das 27 August 2017

War is a Brake On the wheels of the Chariot of Civilization Moving on its Ethereal Time line A nice haiku on war. War applies brakes on all activities that lead to progress. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thank you Neetu dear for this encouraging remarks.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 August 2017

ar is a Brake On the wheels of the Chariot of Civilization Moving on its Ethereal Time line War stops the chariot of civilization from its progrss. Beautiful.10+ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thank you Sanjukta dear for this encouraging remarks.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 25 August 2017

War is a Brake On the wheels of the Chariot of Civilization Moving on its Ethereal Time line The progress of chariot is braked by brakes of war.; Thanks for sharing. Nice haiku sir. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thank you Rini dear for this encouraging remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 25 August 2017

War is a Brake On the wheels of the Chariot of Civilization Moving on its Ethereal Time line War brakes the progress of a civilization. Nice haiku alarming us. 10+

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thank you Sabita dear for this encouraging remarks.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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