War - 21 (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

War - 21 (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


War is a cup of venom

Poured into the feeding bottle of a Nation

By someone supposed to protect it!

Thursday, August 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: war,war and peace,war memories,warfare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendra Rout 27 October 2017

War is a cup of venom Poured into the feeding bottle of a Nation By someone supposed to protect it! .it was a lovely haiku.thanks for shairing...10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thank you dear Raj for this encouraging remarks.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 August 2017

War is a cup of venom Poured into the feeding bottle of a Nation By someone supposed to protect it! Yes this venom can kill a nation. 10++ for the nice haiku.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks, Thank you dear Sanjukta for this encouraging remarks.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 25 August 2017

War is a cup of venom Poured into the feeding bottle of a Nation By someone supposed to protect it! Yes this small cup of venom is enough to spoil a nation. Beautiful haiku. 10+++ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks, Thank you dear Rini for this encouraging remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 25 August 2017

War is a cup of venom Poured into the feeding bottle of a Nation By someone supposed to protect it! The cup of venom called war is poured into minds of crores and spoils every attempt of peace and progress. Nice one.10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks Sabita, Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 25 August 2017

War is a cup of venom Poured into the feeding bottle of a Nation By someone supposed to protect it! I love this concept and this series of war haikus. The venom of war has contaminated the pure hearts across borders. Thanks poet for the haiku.10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks Neetu, Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks here.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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