kafil uddin raihan.
Feni, Bangladesh

War And Child....(01)

Rating: 5.0
He was walking with his father,
There was a ice cream in his hand.
Every thing was as usual,
Crowd making noise around them,
Suddenly, there was a scream,
His father push him far,
He heard nothing but a loud 'boom'
It seemed to him as a thunder,
He saw fumes and smokes all around.
Every one was running here and there.
There was sounds of firing and cry,
He felt that he had been deaf.
he saw the ice cream melting in dust,
Beside that ice cream there was father,
Blood all over his wound muscles.
His body had torn and burnt,
The boy ran to his father,
Try to awake him from last sleep,
But that dead man made no response,
The boy started crying beside that,
None to help him in that hell,
None to drag that dead body,
None to say that his father was dead,
Did the boy know What is death?
Did he make up what he lost?
Is that little boy alive to tell us,
That brutal fairy tale of his life?
Is that boy know what is war now?
Monday, July 27, 2009
Roman Petrov 06 August 2009
this poem, obviously is very sad and well written, I'll give you 10/10! Thank you for your comments on my poems, I appreciate!
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Matthew C. L. Pratt 03 August 2009
Beautifully sad, well written.
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Shahzada Imtiaz Ali 01 August 2009
artist man, your patriotic feelings are exceptional. good work.
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dr veenaa rai 31 July 2009
very dramatic description of terrorism eating up lives, , , good work indeed
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Khushboo Gul 31 July 2009
Hi raihan, good job. Actually i always write love related poems either for happy moments or sad, but reading ur poem have really touched me a lot. great job
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Catrina Heart 29 July 2009
A dreadful poetic narration in eloquence. Such agony for the child to witness into his own eyes the death of his father and the terror he had experienced that made a curve and slash to his own self....Thanks!
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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 July 2009
Very sad. If you can find the time read 'Confrontation'.
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Herbert Nehrlich2 29 July 2009
A sad story, well told but it would greatly benefit by some (Bach or Haendel style) music.
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Lady Grace 28 July 2009
the story inside the poem is really happening..tho it ends wth a sorrowful setting but this is well express...the child perhaps didnt understand the situation but as he grows old, he is more open to every situation like what u are expressing in ur poem..
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~ Jon London ~ 28 July 2009
The effect of what you've penned here..is of the true sorrow what accures...it remains with us forever.....well penned my friend...deep and touching write
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