Was It Worth It? Poem by Susan Williams

Was It Worth It?

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Was it worth it?
he asked as he softly closed the door behind him
with his large hands at the end of arms
corded with power and strength
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Was it worth it?
he asked from behind her
with his barely-there touch
as soft as silken sin
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Was it worth it?
he whispered softly in the darkness
lighting a candle
and looking at himself in the mirror
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Was it worth it?
he asked, watching the candlelight
flickering over her soft skin
casting her with light and shadow
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~~~~~~~~©2019 Susan Williams.

Sunday, August 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: danger
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A B Faniki 21 December 2019

Deep and creative. I love the imagery. Thanks for sharing

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Susan Williams 06 January 2020

Thank you for the encouraging remarks! ! I appreciate the kindness

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 December 2019

Light and shadow! ! Muse, Power and strength. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 15 December 2019

And thank you for reading! !

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 December 2019

'a barely-there touch', 'as soft as silken sin', ... lovely expressions indeed, ... in response i would say were it no worth life would lose its worth and all its mirth...

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Susan Williams 13 December 2019

Love your comments - they are astute and poetic and I enjoy reading them! ! !

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 December 2019

contd.. correction, were it not worth

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 December 2019

The message is well expressed in this poem, dear Ma’am Susan.....10+++

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Susan Williams 11 December 2019

Thank you for your comment! ! And for the sparkly 10's! ! ! !

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Muhammad Ali 29 November 2019

Hi Susan. He lights candle and keeps shadows living, in the boundary of the room and inner-self. while delivering light and voice not eliminating silence and darkness. beautiful piece of work. beautiful being untold.

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