Waterfall Poem by Miharbi S

Waterfall

Rating: 5.0


Our love was as deep as the deepest ocean,
filled with emotion, passion, and devotion.
Years passed and I felt we will always be together,
sailing like a ship in the open sea forever.

But a gale hit and shook us over,
And suddenly we started drifting from each other.
I watched in horror as we began to part,
Trying to reach out; fighting the currents with all my heart.

It was far to late, as you were no where to be seen,
and now I can only dream of what could have been.
For our love vanished in the mist of it all,
like a ship lost at a waterfall.

Saturday, March 3, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up,loss,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 03 March 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great poem, May i invite you to read my new poem called, Stars In The Night.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 June 2020

It was far to late, as you were no where to be seen, and now I can only dream of what could have been. For Now our love has vanished in the mist of all, like a ship lost at a waterfall. A dream of what could have been. fine poem..full of desire. tony

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Chinedu Dike 04 June 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very heartfelt with strong emotions.

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 February 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, miharbi. You may like to read my poem, Love and. Thanks

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 September 2012

Very well, the poem is perfect and enjoyable, the rhymes are so solid and great. nice one

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Madhavi Grace 20 May 2012

loved it................it is full of emotion, though very sad, do keep writing, would love to hear from you

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