Waterfall Of Hopes* Poem by Rehan Hyder

Waterfall Of Hopes*

Rating: 5.0


take me along, when it happens
if the stars and your dreams
and the waterfall of hopes that
defines you so permit
for regardless of
the magnolia and azure
that I drape myself in
my journeys get entangle
in algae of 'green' and can't break free

* Inspired by Deana & christended by Roger Cornish thanks :)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 31 March 2008

it takes a while to understand but it is lovely rehan.

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Original Unknown Girl 31 March 2008

Beautiful! ! And you couldn't get 2 greater poets to help you out either! Lovely imagery. Well Done. HG: -) xx

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Don Mcwilliams 31 March 2008

Terrific, Rehan! Thanks! Don

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Ann Beard 31 March 2008

Quite Lovely thank you.

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Indira Babbellapati 01 April 2008

yet another facet of hope...cascading...

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

for regardless of the magnolia and azure that I drape myself in Rachel Ann Butler

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Marieta Maglas 21 June 2009

''that I drape myself in my journeys get entangle in algae of 'green' and can't break free '' a lovely poem...a dearest poet...10+++

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 03 September 2008

excellent write rehan! ! my my the way you bgin this one is like an old friend taking you by the arm and gently falling in stride alongside you....very soulful and wistful all at the same time...10!

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Ershad Mazumder 02 September 2008

This piece i feel more poetic than other one.

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Matt Johnston 26 May 2008

To me this poem brings a feeling of being around someone, say a good friend, who has great dreams, and just knowing that there dreams will send them rocketing across the sky while I’m stuck mired in the mud. Not that I find your poem sad, no quite the opposite; and that, that makes it very, very interesting.

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