Frank Lisa IndiRa Francesca Roger Platt Cornish Martin


Waterfall Of Hopes* - Poem by Frank Lisa IndiRa Francesca Roger Platt Cornish Martin

take me along, when it happens
if the stars and your dreams
and the waterfall of hopes that
defines you so permit
for regardless of
the magnolia and azure
that I drape myself in
my journeys get entangle
in algae of 'green' and can't break free

* Inspired by Deana & christended by Roger Cornish thanks :)


Comments about Waterfall Of Hopes* by Frank Lisa IndiRa Francesca Roger Platt Cornish Martin

  • (9/20/2009 11:59:00 AM)


    for regardless of
    the magnolia and azure
    that I drape myself in

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (6/21/2009 5:25:00 AM)


    ''that I drape myself in
    my journeys get entangle
    in algae of 'green' and can't break free ''
    a lovely poem...a dearest poet...10+++
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  • (9/3/2008 12:25:00 PM)


    excellent write rehan! ! my my the way you bgin this one is like an old friend taking you by the arm and gently falling in stride alongside you....very soulful and wistful all at the same time...10! (Report) Reply

  • Ershad Mazumder (9/2/2008 11:31:00 PM)


    This piece i feel more poetic than other one. (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2008 10:54:00 PM)


    To me this poem brings a feeling of being around someone, say a good friend, who has great dreams, and just knowing that there dreams will send them rocketing across the sky while I’m stuck mired in the mud. Not that I find your poem sad, no quite the opposite; and that, that makes it very, very interesting. (Report) Reply

  • (4/7/2008 2:20:00 AM)


    I'm aware of the inspiration of D's poetry... but this responce was so magical I thought it was a famous poem.

    Which of course it is!

    Well done Rehan. Its golden on its
    own.

    Rogerx.
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  • (4/7/2008 1:50:00 AM)


    Hey wasn't expecting that at the end! ! ! 10fold in its volumes (Report) Reply

  • (4/1/2008 4:51:00 AM)


    yet another facet of hope...cascading... (Report) Reply

  • Ann Beard (3/31/2008 3:52:00 PM)


    Quite Lovely thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2008 12:23:00 PM)


    Terrific, Rehan! Thanks!

    Don
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  • (3/31/2008 8:01:00 AM)


    Beautiful! ! And you couldn't get 2 greater poets to help you out either! Lovely imagery. Well Done. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • john tiong chunghoo (3/31/2008 7:02:00 AM)


    it takes a while to understand but it is lovely rehan. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 31, 2008



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