Though the petals fall
Silently upon hardwood
Laughing at the waves
Washing away hope and words
Words that would never be tamed
While nature or time can wash away our hope, our spoken truths cannot be quieted . They remain strong. A very discerning poem worth rereading.
A beautiful and meaningful poem with striking imagery re: fragile petals and hardwood. When we feel vulnerable we lean on our strength. Indeed, words can never be tamed, their essence are enduring. A great poem well thought out.
So beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++
So beautifully painted with such heart and soul, words with a melancholy flow.
A wonderful poem about waves dear Rob. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely poem Rob! Well done x
Much thanks Jayne! ! Glad you liked it!