Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 163,108 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

We Feel Sweetness Of Dusk - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Dusk knocks at the end of day
To take away of charm of its
And it gives back darkness
We sleep daily in lap of night.

We weak up by touch of light
Next day again brings cheer
We feel and realize importance
And again we sleep at next dusk.

Vary sweet expression dusk gives
We find the new age life and feel
Dusk takes birth in West we see
And we rise up in East with sun.

We feel wonderful sweetness ever
God's creation is very romantic
Having strong will power we feel
Again we surrender before father.

Topic(s) of this poem: evening, life, life and death, spiritual


Comments about We Feel Sweetness Of Dusk by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Akhtar Jawad (12/12/2015 8:23:00 AM)


    A beautiful description of day and night cycle of life. (Report) Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (12/10/2015 4:15:00 PM)


    The pleasures of nature are truly beautiful.
    There is always such peach in your words. Thank You
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  • Kelly Kurt (12/10/2015 12:35:00 PM)


    The wonder of nature is inspiring (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (12/10/2015 10:14:00 AM)


    Quite a spiritual view in to one's own self, as it almost effortlessly happens especially in aging mode. Life and death, spirituality, loneliness, faith etc seem to keep our minds in business. I get a feeling as if I wrote.it. Thanks Kumar, for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/10/2015 9:18:00 AM)


    Nicely thought and written as usual.10+++
    We feel wonderful sweetness ever
    God's creation is very romantic
    Having strong will power we feel
    Again we surrender before father.
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 10, 2015



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