We Find This Freedom Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

We Find This Freedom

Rating: 5.0


At this early morning we sing
Birds too sing with us in joy
New light rays come up near
No obstacles we face we feel.

Mind blooms with flowers sure
New grasses grow with on soil
Mist slowly evaporates and says
Go on writing new, new poems.

Lovely life twists to vision
Beauty of new season we feel
Definite hope adores life more
We find freedom in nature's lap.

Viewing this life fantastically
We hope again to have affection
This morning sings for freedom
This eternal freedom is given.

Sunday, November 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,morning,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2015

Nature knows us very well. We like changes and nature brings changes that make our lives attractive and pleasant. A beautiful poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2022

Beauty of new season we feel.... beautiful. A marvelous poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 April 2021

What a soulful Song,5 Stars for this enchanting poem, loveliest morning song about freedom as well as about poetic writing, I cite your lines here: Mist slowly evaporates and says Go on writing new, new poems.. How beautiful are these words!

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Isabel Pimentel 17 October 2020

Birds sing, morning sings and beautiful mind also sings. This poem is very interesting. I too sing reading it.

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Michael Walker 12 May 2019

'Freedom' is a word which resonates with me and it it is reminiscent of the morning sounds of which you speak. A growing mastery of sound words in your poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 March 2016

Freedom with the rights of peace. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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