Notes In The Snow Poem by Mary Angela Douglas

Mary Angela Douglas

Mary Angela Douglas

Little Rock, Arkansas United States of America

Notes In The Snow

Rating: 5.0


what if we wrote notes in the snow

here we were when the birds finished the breadcrumb trail

and farther along, here we sat down on a frozen log

consuming the last of the berries

and on a white stone wrote our last testament.

what if the snow froze forever

the trees as well; all in a pale green glaze...

making our permafrost poetry,

Immortal

mary angela douglas 13 november 2020

Friday, November 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 06 December 2020

Such a pretty poem! Congratulations, Mary Angela, for being chosen as Member Poem of the Day!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 December 2020

Hats off to the great flight of imagery and expression of the conceptualization. Congrats on poem of the day.5 stars.

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Richard Wlodarski 06 December 2020

A very fine tribute to poetry and to Mother Nature! Mary Angela, Congratulations on the honour of receiving POD!

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Kim Barney 06 December 2020

Immortal permafrost poetry! What a marvelous idea! I love it! Congrats on poem of the day, Mary Angela!

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 December 2020

what if the snow froze forever the trees as well; all in a pale green glaze... making our permafrost poetry, Immortal/// though the last word of this poem is immortal but here I feel a sad note on the life; it's wonderful to me, congrats for being selected this poem as POD... from me 5*****

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Rebecca Navarre 23 October 2023

And though a bit late, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 23 October 2023

Beautifully painted! .. Beautiful sentiments! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Khairul Ahsan 06 December 2020

The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I gladly give it: 5 Stars *****! I am so glad to see this poem selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Khairul Ahsan 06 December 2020

Loved your imaginary 'Notes in the Snow'. Loved the softness of the thoughts and their closeness to me. Loved the steady flow too. 'what if the snow froze forever the trees as well; all in a pale green glaze... making our permafrost poetry, Immortal'- That's a beautiful, poetically contagious imagination! Loved it. Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Member Poem of the Day’!

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 December 2020

though this poem finished with the word " Immortal" yet I feel sad note all thorough of this poem; the sad which has been inscribed on the white stone full with frozen snow like an epitaph; the birds were as usual taking berries avoiding the bitter cold snow and the trees were in the faded glory losing the green in white frost; nevertheless, the mind felt at last immortal- it's wonderful to me;

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Mary Angela Douglas

Mary Angela Douglas

Little Rock, Arkansas United States of America
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