Manonton Dalan

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We Should Be Ready - Poem by Manonton Dalan

broken branches showing
now that tree are naked
to sun caress and yours
where is strong breeze
to knock all those dried
and rotting twigs hanging
maybe heavy snow fall will

ground is covered with brown
camouflaging deadly critters
who refuse to seek shelter
hibernate deep underground
maybe it's warm fall or them
hungry looking for food
for a long, harsh winter

Topic(s) of this poem: nature


Comments about We Should Be Ready by Manonton Dalan

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/18/2015 3:02:00 AM)


    nature is depicted very dexterously in the poem, well penned thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/18/2015 2:41:00 AM)


    Broken branches are showing very wonderful vision in this amazing imagery. Fantastic sharing.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 18, 2015



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