We Were Lost In A Valley *** Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

We Were Lost In A Valley ***

Rating: 4.1


The sun searched for you in clouds,
And I was lost by the moon from eyes,
We in one valley collected camomiles,
Also stood to each other with a back...

18.VII.08.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Costa Anakiev 23 April 2009

Dear Tsira, I love this mixture of space bodies, flowers, your love and you. Konstantin.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 July 2008

you facing the sun and your mate the moon not able to see each other eye to eye...what still hold you both there in the valley could be the aromatic smell of camomile, the life 10

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Emancipation Planz 19 July 2008

The sun searched for you in clouds... (I wish I had written that..) .. I see this piece as 2 distinct couplets that are co-joint in consummation... aroha Deana xx

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 18 July 2008

yellow camomile the sun, white camomile the moon, lovely life among them...beautiful thanks for sharing 10

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Rema Prasanna 18 July 2008

Rolling earth I watch this in surprise.. It is a fine write.. liked it. Rema

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