WEIGHTING EACH THOUGHT
With pen in hand
a journey begins
taking pride in my
approach
weighting each thought
as correct
inner most desires on
display
a soul is laid bare
the book of life is open
for all to see.
Aloha Heather... Thank you for your contributions to this craft... to wright a write to perfection is our goal... and to answer our own inner questionings within a line or two of prose is the perfection of our own self-interest... [a soul is laid bare]... perhaps should read... My soul is laid bare... imagine our souls mingling at that nudist colony retreat! and not being at all shy about the forms, of our shapes... thank you for your post and for these entertaining thoughts that your words have made to me this eve... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.
The book of life is laid bare...! Any one can take it and read! You don't have anything to hide and with confidence and contentment, you throw the invitation to make a perusal of it!
The book of life is laid bare...! Any one can take it and read! You don't have anything to hide and with confidence and contentment, you throw the invitation to make a perusal of it!
very thoughtful The book of life is open for all to see. Thanks for sharing, Heather!
weighting each thought as correct.........................we can be an open book....nice work...
A man is judged by his thought and poet what ever he writes he take the ink thought and put on paper for the people- appreciation means thought is in right direction - the book of life is open for all to see. lovey and its the truth ye painted..thank you
greatly gauged the actual worth of thoughts.........................i really liked it thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
...........intriguing poem.....life is so much like a book.....actually, I have thought of this often.....it's like we move from page one and then chapter followed by chapter until the final conclusion....