Weighting Each Thought Poem by Heather Burns

Weighting Each Thought

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WEIGHTING EACH THOUGHT


With pen in hand
a journey begins

taking pride in my
approach
weighting each thought
as correct

inner most desires on
display
a soul is laid bare

the book of life is open
for all to see.

Friday, November 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 21 November 2014

...........intriguing poem.....life is so much like a book.....actually, I have thought of this often.....it's like we move from page one and then chapter followed by chapter until the final conclusion....

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Michael Walkerjohn 21 November 2014

Aloha Heather... Thank you for your contributions to this craft... to wright a write to perfection is our goal... and to answer our own inner questionings within a line or two of prose is the perfection of our own self-interest... [a soul is laid bare]... perhaps should read... My soul is laid bare... imagine our souls mingling at that nudist colony retreat! and not being at all shy about the forms, of our shapes... thank you for your post and for these entertaining thoughts that your words have made to me this eve... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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Valsa George 21 November 2014

The book of life is laid bare...! Any one can take it and read! You don't have anything to hide and with confidence and contentment, you throw the invitation to make a perusal of it!

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Valsa George 21 November 2014

The book of life is laid bare...! Any one can take it and read! You don't have anything to hide and with confidence and contentment, you throw the invitation to make a perusal of it!

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Saint Cynosure 30 November 2014

Has it is in all true poets...

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Clarence Prince 24 November 2014

very thoughtful The book of life is open for all to see. Thanks for sharing, Heather!

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Salini Nair 24 November 2014

weighting each thought as correct.........................we can be an open book....nice work...

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2014

A man is judged by his thought and poet what ever he writes he take the ink thought and put on paper for the people- appreciation means thought is in right direction - the book of life is open for all to see. lovey and its the truth ye painted..thank you

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Saheb Mohapatra 23 November 2014

greatly gauged the actual worth of thoughts.........................i really liked it thanks

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