Wen I Missed U Poem by Harsh Vardhan k

Cool one there, ....hello everyone I just joined and I have four wonderful poems I would like you all to read, share and comment. Lots of love.

this is a very nice poem i like it....good theme....poem has its flow....nice keep it up...please read my poem

Lovely poem, I know what that feels like wen I miss you: D.. great job

I find this, very touching and you expressed yourself, very well. Keep up, the good work.

awww I really enjoy this poem and thanks for sharing. I love all poems you write. You write with feeling and your experiences.

nice penning... it tells the story and, i thinks it`s the most important part in my commenting and your writing. good job, keep it up

Outburst of the the heart beautifully inked in this well crafted and poignant write! WELCOME to the Poetry World dear Harsh! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Your talent has been clearly shown in this touching write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

Yes 'WEN I MISSED U' can indeed produce a storm of differing, overpowering emotions, just as you have written.

I like the repition, the way sleep and dead rhymed, and of course the rhythm, its a make sense poem.

Really heart-touching poem. ThanX for your invitation.