What A Girl Wants Poem by Beena Jal

What A Girl Wants

Rating: 5.0

to find that special someone
with him 'to be one'
isn't this what every girl wants

to be a very special bride
have a loving man by her side
isn't this what every girl wants

all her life love him true
and his heart loves her too
isn't this what every girl wants

the question, me it haunts
what is it that i want?

a love, care that last forever
understanding, decreasing never

but is it too much to ask
is this an impossible task

what is true love by the way
'for ever n ever' as to say

the love notes, romantic lines
flowers and 'i love u' signs

how long do they last
does love dissipate that fast?

can there be 'ever lasting love'
from time's time which is above

can love outlive our life
still be alive when we are ninety five

even with the fight and cries
and with life's trials

can i hope a life of love
a life like a free dove

can i hope to feel, that feel
all my wounds that will heal

dare i wish for a love that
fills my heart every day

even when my hair are gray
and my grand kids play

my husband says to me
you are my life, pretty

does such a love exist
can i pray for it at least


some insight into what women really want, though i never understood what mine wanted.

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A . 23 July 2009

Nice! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Pretty composition,10++

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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2009

very nice poem syeda the format is rather novel three threes followed by a string of twos but there is dynamism in novelty.... i wish you well in your endeavour the poem is pretty good and yes... THe questions every normal girl asks nicely put cheers

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so lovely poem...10 Above and all she wants respective call not from any other angle she wants her man to be simple and single

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Afzal Shauq 31 May 2010

wonderful..each stanza is meaningful enough.. I really enjoyed these stanzas and the hidden meainings inside.. lovey poet you are..

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Zaibar Zee 05 December 2009

Nice piece of work, … your notion, also helps a man to understand a woman perspective of life and love.

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Vijay Sai R 19 November 2009

a captivating piece!

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Marieta Maglas 16 November 2009

my husband says to me you are my life, pretty nice confessional poem 10++

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Beena Jal

Beena Jal

Rawalpindi, Pakistan
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